Winter’s Bane

Poem for NTT 10/24/24

A poem based on artwork from Kevin’s NTT

Behold! Autumn’s cool final breath 

Ere blows the icy wind

Ground turns to iron with her howl

The drowsy trees to tin

Beyond all recall, those of then

Lives lived in distant time

Faint voices silenced by the grave

Ayond that mystic line

Ashes to ashes goes the quote

Both builders and the built

Crumble and sigh their story not

‘neath winter’s frigid quilt 

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© My little corner of the world 2024

38 comments

  1. This was both beautiful and frightening, perfectly reminding us and preparing us for the approaching winter season.

    A fantastic tribute to Kevin’s image, well done my Friend.

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  2. Hi Darryl.

    Very evocative . It’s satisfying to jump into a different way of writing every now and then. Poetry used to scare me but I have learnt just to do my own thing, ignore the rules, and have fun!

    MJ

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    1. Thanks, MJ! Yeah, I’m not much of a poet but I felt like this particular picture needed some short and punchy. I didn’t know if an 8-6-8-6 meter was legit, but I punted 😂Thanks for the encouragement!

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  4. Great poem Daryl, I review poetry past and present on my own page.

    I hope you don’t mind, but I did that for this poem. I’ve shared the link below. If you have any issues, I’ll immediately take it down.

    Congrats, on your success to date, and I’m looking forward to seeing more great work from you.

    You may find the link to the review here.

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    1. Sneska, thanks so much for the kind words! 😎 I’m glad you liked it, although I can’t take credit for the artwork…that all Kevin and his “No theme Thursday.” But when I saw it. I right off thought of Orion and the two bears. I appreciate you reading it and tanks again for the props 🙂

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